Sunday, June 21, 2009

Sunrise~


Spreading the wings of Divine aura
Ubiquitously beckons uber beauty.
Naval of the universe with fire unfurled
River of life flows relentlessly.
Indeterminate radiance brightens the Within
Sparkling the soul as a Glorified Mystic.
Ends the dark abyss, the Helios' Touch

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P.S: My first ever acrostic poem is inspired from the beautiful picture of 'Sunrise' above, clicked by Sourish- the Day Dreamer at Assi Ghat-Banaras. I so fell in love with this pic instantly that I shamelessly asked it from him as my b'day gift. The sweetheart he is, he immediately gifted it to me with all its claims and authorities. So, legally this pic is mine now :p but the sweetest-heart that I am, I give all the credits to him. :)

This poem is my small token of love dedicated to u, sourish! :)

P.P.S: I am so sorry for not blogging as well as reading all your blogs regularly. still stuck up with lots of works.

75 comments:

  1. This is your "first ever acrostic poem", for real? It sure doesn't seem that way. It seems to be from an experienced writer.

    Well done, you! It complements the photograph very well. I like the "divine" take. Keep writing!!!

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  2. eautiful like the sunrise !! some pics really inspire :) !! good to see u blog !

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  3. Amazing :)
    The poetry compliments the pic! It seems both are incomplete without each other.

    BEautiful!!! :)

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  4. i love this style...and the way u comeup with words..wow..

    tc n cheers

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  5. twweennyy tat was BEUtiful...
    loved it truly :) :)
    love yaa!!
    huggggggggsss :)
    take care!!

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  6. Biotiful :P good one preetzie!!as beutiful as the sunrise itself.. tho wuts happening??

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  7. this is beautiful...

    wat would we be but rotten ash but for the helios touch :)

    take care mate... cheers...

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  8. Beautiful!
    The picture as well as the acrostic! :)

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  9. Amazing picture and the words match it to the hilt!

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  10. beautifully written .I cant believe this is your first acrostic poem.!.

    Pic was very enlightening..!

    My first visit here..wud love to follow this lovely blog..!

    Cheers

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  11. good effort,, doesnt seems to the first one :)
    keep up the good work!

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  12. Thanks for your comment.
    I liked the beautiful presentation of your poem with lovely picture.You are really a very good poet.You have written the poem as wonderful as the sunrise.

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  13. nicely written! and the pic is wonderful too.. :D

    hope to see more acrostic poems from u! :)

    cheers

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  14. Yayie preetilata!!!! i made it finally!!!

    me no likes blogspot!
    :|


    but what me loves is this acrostic!!
    i used to do acrostics for friends names on their bday cards in school

    but urs is like WOW!!!
    u did complete justice to that pic that inspired this piece!

    literary to my liking is what ur blog is girl!! :D

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  15. the picture is awesome and even more so ur poetry...loved it

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  16. AJEY

    thanks a lot ajey. it was indeed my 1st attempt at serious acro. bfr it i was to do it wen i was in school with our names but then i never knw it's a form of a serious poetry.

    thanks a lot for ur support. ur encouraging words always pushes me ahead.

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    PRATZ

    thanks a lot dear. it feels great to get appreciation from some1 who is the queen of acrostic.

    i am yet not into regular blogging dear. the reasons being many :(

    take care. :)

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    AKANKSHA

    so very glad that u liked it. thanks a lot dear. happy to knw that i have justified the beautiful pic with my poem.

    take care. hugs :)

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  17. RABBIT

    thank you so much friend. i am so very glad :)

    take care.

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    SWATI

    tweeny darling.. ab tune kaha hai to maan leti hu but it's not more beautiful than u is. :p meri baat ko maan le aur chup kar ke baith. :p ;)

    but love u truly kya matlab... isse pahale kya falsly hota tha :p :D ;)

    love u sooooooooooo much. hugyzzz... n oye dont miss me coz i am always thr inside ur heart na.

    muahhhhhhhhhh :)

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    ANIZIE

    awweeee thanks a lot anizie. u knw na, ur words mean a lot to me. :)

    lot of things happening dear. laptop not working is one of them :p :(

    take care :)

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  18. ARV

    thanks a lot mate.

    take care. cheers to u too :)

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    MEERA

    thank you dear. :)

    xmz over? hope they went well. :)

    stay blessed.

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    MEENA

    thank you dear. happy to knw that u liked it. :)

    take care. :)

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  19. VYSHU

    a warm welcome to my blog.

    i am so very glad that u loved the poem. thank you so so soooooo much.

    the pic is really amazing. so enlightening that it inspires. :)

    thanks to follow and appreciate my blog. it really means a lot. u too have a very beautiful blog and yes from now count me as ur regular reader.

    thanks a lot vyshu. :)

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    DEEPIKA

    a warm welcome to my blog.

    i am so very glad that u appreciated the poem. thank you so so soooooo much.

    hope to see you around again.

    take care. :)

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    BABLI

    ur words meant a lot to me. thanks for the appreciation . they encouraged me to no end.

    thank you.

    take care :)

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  20. SWETHA

    thanks a lot dear. me too hopes to write more and more acros.

    take care :)

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    CRAFTY

    yippieee dear.. finally u r here.

    me likes d wordpress's comment section a lot. i wish blogspot had it too. but i hate blogspot when it doesn't allow u to comment. :x

    same here dear. i too used to do them same but never realized it is a serious form of poetry. :p

    thank you so much dear. i am so very glad for it. appreciation from frenz like u means a lot. u always encourage me. n i hope to get ur support always.

    i know u know that i love ur blog too. don't u know i dear? .. i know.. u know :)

    hugsssssss :)
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    RAAJI

    thank you so much dear.

    take care :)

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  21. RUSH

    thanks a lot rush. i am so very glad.

    take care :)

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  22. B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L

    The language used is simply amazing :)

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  23. Thanks for liking my photos... I saw your comments there.. I liked your template very much. Do you not feel templates reveal the nature of a person? yours reveal a person who has an artistic mind! The poem is matching the picture!

    I liked the photo too! And I dont know why I am meeting only poets this year!! :-P

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  24. Each word came shining through like the rays of the sun... inspiring.

    I hope you have been well...

    :-)

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  25. Good poem. Keep wriitng more.
    Tc.

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  26. Quite a jugalbandi between you and Sourish..keep it up!!

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  27. The poem is so good...

    I loved the 3rd line though.. :)

    & the picture is absolutely lovely.....

    A great piece of a snap. I am in awe.

    Hats of 2 sourish... :)

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  28. tatzz a nice Acrostic,, :-)

    doesn't seem like ur first time.. :-) the pic is beautiful,, no wonder it inspired u to write those lovely lines.. :-)

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  29. First attempt? Whoa! Beautiful would be an understatement. Loved it, buddy! Keep writing!

    Peace. Be well.

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  30. MISS KIDDO

    T.H.A.N.K.Y.O.U Kiddo :)

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    SHANTUNU

    a warm welcome to my blog. :)

    yep i agree to u on what u said regarding my template. thnx a lot but d credit for it goes to my soulsis lena. :)

    thanks a lot for appreciating my poem as well as the photo. u too have got a lovely photo blog.

    n i think u r plain lucky to meet only poet this year :p
    hope to c u around again. :)

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    PIXIE

    thanks a lot for d appreciation as well as the encouragement dear.

    i have been good. hope u too are :)

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  31. INDRAJIT

    Thank you.

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    RAHUL

    wowwww what comment. n i enjoyed this jugalbandi a lot. yet waiting for sourish's response on it. :)

    thank you rahul :)

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    CHRIZ

    Nah! lucky is me. luckiest sourish :D :P

    Thank you :)

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  32. MUTHU

    You know, even my fav is the 3rd line. thanks a lot. :)

    n i totally agree with u on the pic. me will be always in awe of it.

    n yes hats off to sourish :)

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    MUZER

    i am so very glad girl. thanks a lot for ur love and support.

    but all credit goes to the pic :)

    hugz :)

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    KARTZ

    well well... aap hi ke comment ka intazar ho raha tha :) apart from sourish's. it seems hv to wait some more time for sourish :(

    thank u ! thank u!

    let me tell u, ur appreciation and comments means a lot. :)

    take care. :)

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  33. :) :)

    keep writing, sweets! this one was indeed very good!

    love you!

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  34. oye like hamesha mast likha hei re..loved the idea of divine aura..

    :) n here me sorry 4 tah latest(late):P comment :(

    hugs

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  35. first time on your blog ... and m just impressed :) nice !

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  36. awww that was so beeeeeeeeeeeuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful!!!! and it was so sweet of you to dedicate it to him..

    and my blogs been missing you a lot , as yours has been missing mine. im back now. hope you'll be back soon. then we'll be even :)
    till then,
    hugz
    take care

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  37. beautiful poem preeti!:) anyone would get inspired with such picture where nature at its best.

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  38. I have a similar picture. Good snap,DD! :)

    and oh..I like this idea of an acrostic..very unique..
    Sunrise n sunsets.. my fave have always been Sunsets..
    Btw..whats the Helios' touch? Englighten me, please!:)

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  39. hey preetilata! long time no post! all's okay i hope!

    hugs! :D

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  40. oye hoyeeeeee

    Dedication waaah waaah waah

    really I am out of words...and the way u complimented the pic with that acrostic...mesmerizing .... :P

    thank u thank u.....

    and love u loads for this......

    u made my day :)

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  41. awwee, wud luv to talk to ya.. drop me a mail tellin wen i cud find ya online..

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  42. beautiful...great wordings used

    liked this line

    Sparkling the soul as a Glorified Mystic

    hats off to u....seems like its a work of professional poet

    waiting for more of such kind

    one request too....do post a heartbreaking poem :)

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  43. beautiful.
    my signs were high and low :)

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  44. I dont know which to appreciate
    the poem or the picture that inspired the poem.

    They are good actually beautiful.

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  45. I dont know which to appreciate
    the poem or the picture that inspired the poem.

    They are good actually beautiful.

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  46. Wonderful...

    The last line was the besti as per me..

    keep writing..

    :)

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  47. Hey preeti.

    How ya doing?..

    Take care gal..!

    Come back to blogwrld soon ..

    Cheers

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  48. Awesome! This is my first visit here, as soon as I read white window I went say so cute and this template made me feel so bright. I love it completely!

    =)

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  49. Hey sis!! u rock.. n i know dis s not ya 1st poem..

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  50. you are tagged...!!!

    visit my Land of Dreams...!!!

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  51. hii..m back again..hope u remb me..started a new blog..nd writing again..missed readin ur blog..n i must say lovely poem...nd it soo butifuly compliments d pic..

    have fun..cheers..

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  52. it fills life with energy ...

    jai ho ganga maiya.........

    how ru dear??
    i am fine

    Take Care
    Vikas{V}

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  71. hii..thnx 4 visiting me..nd sharing dis link, else i wuld hav rlly missed sumthing..frst nd it has cum out as a perfect shot..great dear..u hav awsum poetic skills..luved yr wrk..n ya u can try more of acrostics..they r rlly fun..!
    Wish u too a vry prosperous new year..!!!

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