Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Corridors of my heart.

From the corridors of my heart
I see you in my morning sun. 
Warm and loving- 
Comforting my azure life. 

But I want you in my summer noons 
To burn me. To turn me. 

O! Burn me you sun 
And turn me to ashes- 
Make me yours.


  1. Loved the pic and words are fitting :)

  2. You're on the right track! Loved this one :)

  3. From the corridors of my heart I see you in my morning sun - that is beautiful. Agree with Afshan - pic and words go well together.

  4. I have finally understood this poem... Honest confession... poems and me are like cheese and chalk... I have read your last 2 poems too... but you know I am a little dense with poems! :P

  5. u clicked this pic!!! Its mystic .. LOVED IT!

  6. Loved the Pic and the words too. :)

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  7. reminded me of a wonderful song~~ A Fine Frenzy's Ashes and Wine.. :D Poised!

  8. Mmmm...there's something so sensual about this one, Pree.

  9. I can't concentrate on the poem because I know who is the girl in the picture! Lol.. I want!

  10. The last two posts of yours that I have read, I really loved the photograph and the poem complimenting each other. Both of them equally brilliant.

  11. :-) Beautiful title and verse.

  12. intriguing , romantic and so sensual :) you are a real wordsmith aren't you ?:)

  13. Moving poem, love and longing here.

  14. Love.....desire....mistery between two people....How nice !

  15. How beautifully you have equated the times of the day with love and longing! I did not know that afternoon would be represented so..whats the word?..majestically!

    Just one word..w.ow.!

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