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Thursday, April 3, 2014

Bewitched!



Bedazzled, besotted
are the alleys of my heart
Ah! The gift of love

~*~

P.S: Not at all happy with the post. But I think I should be happy for the simple fact that at least I wrote something. All thanks to my Write Tribe.

A to Z Challenge 2013: Broken Yet Intact 

26 comments:

  1. The gift of love is precious - especially when we make it to ourselves! :)

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  2. Loved the usage "alleys of my heart." Loved the pic. as well as the lines.

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  3. Love your post, Preetlata.I can feel the love in it <3

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  4. That is truly bewitching. Very nice Pree.

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  5. Search the alleys of your heart and you'll find yourself - the writer, waiting to bedazzle the world with the beauty of words! Pree you are back and just believe and keep writing! Lv

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  6. This post actually feels quite complete, with a mesmerizing picture and those beautiful words. Looking forward to more!!

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  7. My dear, how I yearn to b where u are.. Bedazzled and bewitched in love. For now, I have to make do with my unhealthy decade old obsession with Amisha Patel! :)

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  8. The gift of love is magical. It opens you up to wonderful life! I don't know how I missed this awesome blog. Bookmarked you :) Will be back again.

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  9. Hey I loved that.. short yet so evocative.

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  10. What a mesmerizing picture! Love can do such wondrous things to us :) Beautiful start, Preetilata :)

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  11. The gift of love is indeed bewitching... Love how you convey so much with so few words... :)

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  12. As always, the picture you create with your words. We missed you loads.

    Bhavya @ Ishithaa

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  13. You know, Preetilata, I remember your post from last year.
    And please remove any misgivings about this post from your head. It is beautiful

    Hugs! Glad to see you write.

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  14. This is so beautiful, Preetilata !! Short, sweet and meaningful :) I'm loving it :)

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  15. Very beautiful poem:-) And that picture is hard to look away from. Nice blog you have - that quote from Søren Kierkegaard is one of my favorites:-) Will come by again:-)

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  16. Lovely. The most wonderful gift you can give is love. ♥

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  17. The omage who could create with your words.... just beautiful! <3

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  18. perfect wordings
    hard to come by
    for a feeling...

    Nice !

    PhenoMenon
    http://throodalookingglass.com/2014/04/deer-o-dear/

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  19. Ahh the rushes of love, dazzling us for years..

    Richa

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  20. ahh the feeling of being in love :) beautifully expressed

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  21. Aha! Love...you have captured the emotions perfectly!! :) ♥

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  22. the intoxication of love, pretty well captured in this haiku.. this is beautiful :)

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plz.. open d white window :)