Friday, April 4, 2014

Dior J 'adore


Like morning raaga, it fills the heart
That kiss of sun, sparkling on the shoulder 
Like the golden mischief that glints in your eyes 
Like a gypsies magic, it spells all around 
A little bit of honey and a lot of dew 
A waif of air that carries folklore 
The rustic elegance and the high heels of sophistication 
Mysterious allure, and a mystic appeal. 
Hidden beneath a layer of mist. 
Spring is there in every step
When it simmers on my skin like a fresh sunbeam.

~*~

A to Z Challenge 2013: Dreamcatcher

17 comments:

  1. Lovely, especially the last line When it simmers on my skin like a fresh sunbeam.

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  2. I'm just glad to see you are up and at it again when it comes to poetry :) You write gems, and no, I don't mean the chocolate ;) Beautiful post.

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  3. So beautiful! I loved these lines in particular :
    "That kiss of sun, sparkling on the shoulder
    Like the golden mischief that glints in your eyes "
    There's something about being alive in these lines... :D

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  4. Pree, so good to see you here, blogging again!!
    And that's a beautiful one! ♥

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  5. Ah...so beautiful...I could smell it in your words! :)

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  6. There is the scent of sweetness in your words, Preetilata. So glad to connect via AtoZ :)

    Shailaja
    Introspection in Shades of 11
    A to Z Challenge, 2014

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  7. This was so beautiful :) Your words spreading that sweet scent.. Aditi, from A2Z

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  8. Very sweet poem, resembling the certain sweetness of the scent! Beautifully writen:)

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  9. Welcome to the A to Z Challenge! Nice poem. I wish I could write poetry. A little haiku sometimes. But that's abut it.

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  10. Beautiful! Such a lovely poem. ♥

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  11. Very interesting poetic format. Thanks.

    beth
    http://bethlapinsatozblog.wordpress.com/

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  12. Very nice!
    Beth
    http://bethlapinsatozblog.wordpress.com/

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  13. Good to read ur unique poems again. This one full of fragrance.
    I am also participating in A to Z- dropping by from there :) good luck

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  14. those lines are chocolate dipped and delicious,,beautifully penned

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  15. Kemon Aacho !
    Hi Remember me !!!Havn't been here years now. I am more into learning Bird photography in G+. Time permitting and if you are in G+add my id as sgsbio@gmail.com

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  16. Hello preeti how r u? It's long long time since I have been to blog world... Nice poem which brings new bright hope in ones life.

    Take Care
    vikas (V)

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  17. Hello preeti how r u? It's long long time since I have been to blog world... Nice poem which brings new bright hope in ones life.

    Take Care
    vikas (V)

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plz.. open d white window :)